All Comments on 'The Demon Queen of Hell'

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Oilcanjon about 1 year ago

Inventive and we'll crafted. It did seem that when they were fighting the spiked thingies, you were "reaching" and it didn't flow as well.

Justplainjeff about 1 year ago

We just read this again, together. It was better this time than it was a while ago. Kudos for this amazing story.

Jeff & Deb

Cracker270 10 months ago

Repeat. Love this story makes my eyes happy

PrestorJohn 5 months ago

“I took my little demon girls by the hands and we went to blow some shit up”

Got to be one of the great last lines on the site!

Great story—very

Anonymous5 months ago

I smiled at the end

SatyrDick 4 months ago

[14.01.24]

Top Tier!

11/10!!!!!

Flar1958 4 months ago

Read it the 4 or 5 th time. You did a great to this. I had to look for days to find it again. Now its save in my favorites. Thank you for your stories🙏👍

Oldfart72 3 months ago

Great!!!

Anonymousabout 1 month ago

Epiphany. Loving family values from hell? A hellspawn youth not rebellious or goth? Ironic.

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