All Comments on 'The Demure Divorcee'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Hot

Really hot!! I hope there is a part 2......

Sidney43Sidney43over 5 years ago

Really over the top, but not so much that it became completely ridiculous. Sensual but with a bit of humor which always makes for a good read. A second chapter would be interesting, perhaps some good court room scenes with the ex. Then, the decision would be about what direction to take the story. Does Emily find a husband of her own, or do they stay together in a loving relationship?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
wild times

usually I'm not a big fan of stories with so many repeat climaxes that the story is too far beyond believable but enjoyed reading of him satisfying the women over and over again.

sabrsuave2366sabrsuave2366over 5 years ago
Awesome

Dear God that was a HOT read!!!! Great job!!!! A++++

Lonely_readerLonely_readerover 5 years ago
Phenomenally HOT

Characters, build-up and sex were over the top.

Just a little thing, that I just understood, the "sodomy" is referred to lesbian sex?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Great NEED SOME Similiar story in future

Perfect

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
not finished

You gotta keep going till Katelyn is pregnant too. However long it takes.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
An absolutely...

...enchanting story. Loved each of the three characters. Katelyn's pregnancy strictly a win-win-win situation. They'll be a very happy family of five! Five well-deserved stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Another round of knock ups

BufoAmericanusBufoAmericanus2 months ago

A well written story with great character development! Thanks

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