by mellors14
Really over the top, but not so much that it became completely ridiculous. Sensual but with a bit of humor which always makes for a good read. A second chapter would be interesting, perhaps some good court room scenes with the ex. Then, the decision would be about what direction to take the story. Does Emily find a husband of her own, or do they stay together in a loving relationship?
usually I'm not a big fan of stories with so many repeat climaxes that the story is too far beyond believable but enjoyed reading of him satisfying the women over and over again.
Characters, build-up and sex were over the top.
Just a little thing, that I just understood, the "sodomy" is referred to lesbian sex?
You gotta keep going till Katelyn is pregnant too. However long it takes.
...enchanting story. Loved each of the three characters. Katelyn's pregnancy strictly a win-win-win situation. They'll be a very happy family of five! Five well-deserved stars.