All Comments on 'The Descending of Jessica Ch. 17'

I like your story. Thanks for continuing. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Thanks for reading, hopefully it won't be 6 months before the next chapter!

I love the characters and read it all this week. I was hoping Carolyn would be in a 3 some with Brent and Jessie. I felt ripped off that I got my wish only for it to end.

I got a little.tire of the hightly detailed minutia of logistics, planning, and shoppi g excursions. It didnt provide much to the story, but that is clearly how you write and like I said....those are my only complaints. I did read all 17 chapters and looking forward to more from you.

I don't know if you will see this or not Anonymous commenter but I am working on the next chapter now, and it should be up in a few weeks. Yeah, I'm a year or so behind on continuing it.

I've been waiting for this threesome. Don't leave us hanging, please! ;-)

This has been a great story arc please continue it....

My husband and I really love your story and we are saddened that it didn't continue. But thank you for an amazing story none the less

I hope to get back to it soon, but you will see some people you recognize in the Mia story, as well as the Adele one. Thanks for reading and for your comment!

Brent will be sorry he started this shit. Carolyn will be the death of their relationship.

Either one, Jess or Brent will get jealous of the others relationship with Carolyn, one of them will want more, or Carolyn will want one of them more.

Jealousy is a bitch and the destroyer of all dreams and relationships.

Our heroes are on a slide and it is speeding up.

Great story...read all before commenting. I for one would love to see what happened next.

Fantastic story! Hoping CH 18 makes an appearance soon