All Comments on 'The Descent'

Not smart enough to find the Interracial section.

Made my skin crawl. What a disgusting idea.

This is just truly sick. George said he thought it was hot, Abbey being a slut, maybe degraded, and pregnant from a strange man. Abbey agreed to being slutty and being debased.

Debased-adjective: Turned upside down from its proper position; inverted; reversed, mixed with impurities, lowered in value

So they explain their choice in color of "their" offspring to family and friends by saying what? That they are twisted, backwards thinking, full of evil thought and intent, and of little self worth or redeeming qualities. They choose to roll a random DNA dice and sow the wind knowing they would likely reap a whirlwind. They will allow the creation of a child that will be the recipient of whispered expletives from relatives and shaking heads from former friends who don't understand the madness that came over Abbey and George. -- 1☆

Hi

You should continue this story

HOT STORY!!!!!!!!

What a pathetic first story. A cuckold and a skank whore story. Nothing original. Stop writing now save yourself time and effort.

So many writers, like yourself, get this all wrong. I guess it is because for you, it is a fantasy

great, 5 stars. More of Abbey and George please. Thank you for writing.

I don't think it's possible for anyone to be this fucked up. Maybe you are.

Put your racist crap in Interracial where all of your fellow racists can find and enjoy it.

Brilliant!! More of this couple please!! We don't have these places in UK which is ridiculous!!

Tag your nightmares correctly. First and foremost Cuckoldry, second whore. Thirdly cum bucket. Fourth pathetic wimp. That way the readers can ignore your attempts at writing.

5 Stars! Great story. Great fantasyfor those of us that ahe the fascination with interracial and sharing wives.. I hope that yu write more.

The hater's don't create. They just tear down.

Not my cup of tea. Good luck to you.

Is it because it's Black History Month that we're getting a ton of weird racist stories in LW?

Aah. That's what I like to see. An Author who abuses the readers in the comment section. Having written a couple of stories on this site and also had some detrimental comments, I find it disappointing that you are so thin skinned as to react that way.

Wrong category - 1* for dumb fuck authors

Great story. It’s always hot thinking about cumming in another man’s wife & sending her home, hopefully with a child to raise. Thanks for the story!!!

Great Story, would love to read more from you. If I could change one thing in your story, I would make it more towards pregnancy RISK, so abbey wouldn't scream "cum in me, knock me up!", but something in the lines of whispering to her husband, "don't worry babe, I know it's risky but I just make him pull out" just as the black cock starts to cum inside her. But otherwise, 5 stars.

It’s always hot thinking about a wife knocked up by someone other than her husband. I’m thinking the truth is this happens more than people realize. I truly hope she ends up pregnant with a black baby for you to raise.

Cuck and whore find Jamal at the glory home. Can’t descend much lower than this.

Great job. Keep it going!

This is a great story. I hope it is continued.

Protected sex is mere mutual masturbation. Real sex is bareback and totally unprotected like Nature intends sex to be.

Hmmm, racists claiming you are racist - the ultimate in projection LOL

As a White dude who has had unprotected sex with some wonderful black sluts I can assure you that the skin color contrast makes IR sex hoter than any other sex, especially if there is a real preg risk.

PS slut: a woman who has the same sex drive as a man and is as open about it as a man. women -> slut; man -> stud.

love it would love see more Chapters as Abbey fucks black men and george starts cleaninup their creampies, having Abbey give birth to black babies

Ok fucking black strangers is pretty erotic but the pregnancy thing kills it for me. Not meant as a criticism, just my preference. Still gave you 4 stars

Pretty good story actually. How about another chapter, one where she really does get knocked up.

I enjoyed the story, it was quite erotic, but there is one aspect I do not understand. Why would any real man wasnt another man o raise his child? That is the true definition of a loser. How could you father a child and not want to be part of his or her life?