All Comments on 'The Desert Oasis'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Damn

That was one hot story. Hope there is more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Next chapter please.

Wonderful start. I enjoyed this story very much. I hope you will post the next part to it soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
At least

You deal with the possibility of offspring in your stories when the pair have spontaneous intercourse without contraception.

Not a bad start. Add a touch of character development and keep going.

MPP

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