All Comments on 'The Desire between Best Friends'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Interesting story

Many friends are in the same boat. Neither wants to make the first move. It is much better to take a chance than regret it for a long, long time.

KarenCDFLKarenCDFLover 4 years ago
Cute story

Overall, I liked the story.

I would have liked to seen a more drawn out interaction between Nicky & Ryan leading up to their first kiss.

Please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Loved the story...a nice added touch could be how they looked into each others eyes as they came and kiss on her forehead...stroking my hard 7 inch cock reading this

PowerofthetonguePowerofthetongueover 4 years ago

4/5 because it was short. Its too good of a start to leave it hanging with the doorbell ringing. Hope there is a continuation into the discussion of why they waited and carrying it into either FWB and dealing with jealousy when dating or they finally see their love and go forward together.

ravishmentravishmentover 4 years ago

It was just getting delicious~ Please continue

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