All Comments on 'The Despicable Plan Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
damn! waiting for more!

This is very nicely crafted. Slow in the beginning but caught up speed quite fast and now it's on fire. Will they have sex next?

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I like stories that have logic and flow smoothly without any jumps. In my opinion sufficient time should be given to building a story up because reading erotica is a much dedicated form compared to porn. And the drop and bang just doesn't work! I've been reading stories for qu...

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