All Comments on 'The Devil and the Sea Ch. 10'

Amazing. I await the last chapter/s with bated breath.

OMG!!! This is where you stopping? First Anya is talking about a baby and now Jen is cheating. Great story. Thanks!

Henry and Anya essentially catfishing Jen was bad enough...enough of a red flag their relationship was rocky.

This part just adds to that.

Damn, I feel so sorry for Anya and Henry. Personally I don’t think they did anything wrong with the Mistress X situation. Jen wanted a Domme and Anya wanted to learn how to fulfil those needs for her. In this fictional scenario it didn’t work the way they were aiming for but that’s artistic license at work. If anything the one thing that didn’t sit right with me was that neither Jen or Henry advocated that Jen should tell Mistress X that she had a wife.

It’s a heartbreaking situation as it stands but I’m guessing there may yet be hope, maybe Jen worked out the identity of Ms. X and is prancing them back? I guess I’m about to find out.

As always, exceptional story telling. Thx

Tess (uk)

Play stupid games, win stupid prizes.

A lot of your stories I have the feeling that the people involved tend to fly waaaaay to close to the sun and risk crashing right into the sea. I seems kind of realistic that you remind the reader that things could really autodestruct completely.

Play stupid games, win stupid prizes.

Damn, your protagonists sure love to play risky games... and sometimes you just lose.

Much of this series has been the Henry and Anya show. Look if you're trying to get me to ship them, it's been working for like 6 chapters. As for Jen... So ironic that she already has what she thinks she needs to leave her partners to get--a permanent relationship with her mistress. And so weird that she's pushing a baby at the same time as planning this!