All Comments on 'The Devil Ch. 04'

Dante really is very sweet.

not what i expected from Dante was looking forward to some rougher sex ,but good never the less

I am really enjoying this story. Dante is so much more than the image he projects. Hwe reminds me of an old, old rock song "Devil or Angel".

The storyline I mean. I usually have to wait for a few more chapters before a couple calls themselves a couple, but I like it. I can't wait to hear more of Dante and Sage :D

I'm gonna be frank, their "relationship" escalated pretty quickly lol. I mean they just met! But I can't help but over look it because they're just so sweet together >.< I can't wait to see how this turns out. I'm also wondering how this will affect his job as a Child Services Agent (if at all). Good work! Keep it up!

P.S. your submissions are short but I never feel like it's ever lacking. I never ask myself "is that it?". I'm always satisfied (most likely due to how you end them. No loose strings). It keeps me wanting more, but never growing impatient. It's complicated. Im complicated. This review is lame XD

Just... Thanks :)

What a difference a day makes,just a sweet 24 hours. Still think there is more to Dante than meets the eye and what's with the seven year old kid?

I love a fairytale. This is it, and they live happily ever after... The end.

I just want to comment on that. I met my partner, moved in within a few days, and have been together for 15 years. So, this does not shock, nor surprise, me in the least.

Yes, it is moving fast, but that happens in life sometimes. I am enjoying this story and look forward to the next chapters...I want to know more about this function and this little girl!!!

Where is the next story???!!!!!

PLEEEEAAAASE LET THERE BE A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow...... I just LOVE this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Omg more oh plz these two are so cute together not much drama but I don't care I just love the passion and love from these two plz write more so much more

I'm sure some people will say this went entirely too fast, but if this story wasn't a perfect representation of all my past relationships, I don't know what would be.

I really liked that ~ good read!!