All Comments on 'The Devil in Devlin'

I would have given anything to have a friend like Caleb when I came out. Damn religious bigots.

Hot. have to wondr how they went from total secrecy to kissing in front of the f. parents like that but everybody has there breaking point I guess.

Nice solid follow-up to your last story.

Clever title but damn that kid had a screwed up life.

Agreed, its so hurtful that ppl judge gay, lesbian and bi ppl like this after they tell us to be ourselves..... Love is love no mattter wat it looks like. Beautiful story, loved how they probably just thought "eff it" at the end and kissed in front of everyone

I enjoyed this awesome story a lot. I agree with Anon that there are too many people hung up on labels in this world and the church leads the charge Just live and let live

This was so great! I loved your last story and was looking forward to something new from you. Keep writing. I can't wait for more.

Thank you, cliffgirl, for your continued writing about happy (teenage) gay love. I applaud you for daring to dream a better future for these kids. This was beautifully written and carefully crafted. Perhaps, in time, we will learn about Dev and Kody five years after college: strong, accomplished and still in love.

It took me forever to read this through, and I could not stop reading it. Well done! The best of all your works!!!

I loved it? I haven't gotten to a chance to fully read it yet (still on page 3, but getting there!).

I honestly thought Devvie was going to end up with Mr. Hunky Caleb, but I guess not~

I like the story. At first I thought that the story was gonna be too dark but you fixed that. Now as a question will this story be continued?

Well written, great story with the perfect pace. The character development was done very well although I wish there had been more details during the development of their relationship. Overall a great read!

No, this is just a single chapter story.

Thank you for writing this so soon after your last story. Please, please continue to share your stories with us.

The story at beginning was a little too much written of the foster homes but I experienced some of what was written myself. Sometimes you have to get it on paper, so others know what REALLY was going on in that setting & loneliness in a loveless home. The rest of the story was a good read, needs another college life part with the wacky religious figures thrown in for some comic relief. The sex scenes are very good & enjoyed the story as a whole. Well done with Caleb.

Where are all of your stories? Dreaming of Dax and Love Unexpected? Did you delete them?

About this one, I would have liked to see a little more of Dev and Dakota's relationship after they got together, but I like it.

echoing what 8skaterz8 said...where are your other stories? I absolutely loved Dreaming of Dax series.

To those commentators asking for cliffgirl's other stories, just go to the biography page, where she explains the reasons and let's you know where you can find the two series.

I liked this story for many reasons. One of them was that although you showed very clearly how sad religious bigotry against homosexuality is, you also gave credit to the fact that this foster famliy was so much better in many ways due to the inherent goodness (no abuse, kind treatment, simple decency to other humans) which is also part of a good Christian faith.

This was a sad but beautiful story as always and I hope we see more about these two because they are great. I would love to know how Dakota, coming from such a strict upbringing got away with the piercings and tatts though...

please don't delete this story too. so many of you good writers are leaving here.

i'm glad you didn't do the typical cliche where devlin and caleb fell in love, but i liked the role caleb played of cupid. he was a cool dude when you think about his background and what he had been taught about homosexuality. loved the interaction between caleb and devlin when dakota disappeared and how they banded together to find him.

This story was amazing! You are very talented and could definitey get published! :)

*passed.out

I don't know how I missed this wonderful story. I dream of a day when bigotry is a forgotten word and children don't have to be afraid of telling their parents they're gay. Every gay teenager needs a friend like Caleb. Good job.

What an awesome story! I agree with Timothy. Im' not excusing the Simons family for being ultra-religious and intolerant, but at least they were good people and didn't abuse Devlin. I hope we read more about these two.

"climbed back in his truck and drove away to freedom." to save the world....

i can totally imagine the music to the film of this in my head. love, love, love this story.

Loveeeeeee it.

Wooooooo. Read it and loved it you are av true romantic and amazing author. More from these two please.

I've never read a gay romance story that I felt so inthrawled by. Towards the end I was on the edge of my seat, fearing that something would get in the way of their love.

Very nicely, tastefully written. I could really see this being turned into a film!

Shocking, exciting.

Thank you, for highlighting the contradictory views of religion, and love.

Really one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read.

Forget the sex (also good), this is a really good story, very touching. Thanks.

Great story love the ending love the whole thing I was surprised that Deviln didn't like Caleb but I'm glad he's with Dakota their cute together

You are deeply missed and your memory will live on in all the lives you touched while here on earth.

You know a story is good when you can't wait for it to END so you can rest assured that it turns out okay in the long run! Had my breath held and my fingers crossed, and you didn't let me down! Kudos on a great story with a brilliant sense of pacing with a clean, satisfying wrap up.

I really enjoyed this

That’s it great love story