All Comments on 'The Devil's Bargain Ch. 03'

Enjoying this story a lot. Thanks for posting it.

It was an ok read but I didn't pick up any plot but fucking a couple of women and getting rid of a bad guy. Still rated 5 stars for the writing.

THANK YOU for not letting Dan trying to be "superior" with Monica, although she's clearly used to being top of the food chain. You surprised me with Monica calling out to Dan as if he were Mr. Studly, though! jajaja. However, Jared punching him was no laughing matter--and it made Dan's revenge all the sweeter! Way to wrap up that section with it turning Monica on so seriously. To follow it up with Holly loving the haircut? Priceless.

Thanks for showing such consideration with Holly: I LOVED how Dan thought enough to think of Holly's heritage and to cook her lobster. No wonder she cried! That touched her heart...and the way things are going, Dan and Holly have a good shot at a real relationship (although Dan claims he's not looking for one). I realize you inserted that Dan wouldn't be enough to "improve her visibility," but she sure has taken to him! I'm rooting for the both of them!

You crafted this chapter masterfully! Thanks for such a great read, with such efficient writing at all the right places. 5

Great story. Please continue

Lol. I grew up in Southern Ontario, and married a Nova Scotian girl i met there. I've had lobsters flown in. It's a winner!