All Comments on 'The Devil's Bargain Ch. 10'

Wow...needing to forget is one thing, but crashing and burning with 2 (Alanna and Kim) so quickly had to provide much entertainment for "Tansa." Alanna sure didn't fit the "redhead" saying and Kim...boy was she holding out! I imagine Dan dumping her, although being over-the-moon happy for Josh? What a jar of cold water to Dan's face, though! No surprise about Holly, although it's so distressing to read about Lisa's disinterest now. Only real "reveal" is the dog-walking club, which is a cute way to turn things around and to have Dan form some real relationships, so he has real and unfettered interactions.

We're left with Lisa's mystery, and where the Bennetts might fit in all of this. 5

Wow! Did not see that coming!

O.o did not see that one coming. I guess Josh and Kim got together after he invoked the deal. Or Kim isn't committed to Josh. Next chapter should definitely be interesting that's for sure.

Kim huh ... Didn't see that coming. Nice twist.

Wow! The conversation with Kim will be interesting!

Uh oh...

Oh dang...

Those last 3 lines are hilarious!!!!

"You know her, it's Kim. What do you think?"

What *I'm* thinking is Scooby-Doo going "Ruh roh!"

Oh for fuck's sake. What a cast iron bitch!

Wait, Josh said that Josh had girlfriend?

I'm used to your stories being mostly story with a bit of sex.

This one is sex with a bit of story.

It's good though, just saying...