All Comments on 'The Devil's Details - Ch. 01'

Interesting premise and start

Makes a good start, sounds interesting.

Unusual start to a interesting story.

Oh yeah . This is going to be good .

Will keep an eye on this one and see if it builds

3/5

a striking and witty beginning.

I hope I do not sound ungrateful for your gift to us of your stories, but this does now leave six on-going narratives. I hope they all will eventually be tied up. I noted that this is "commissioned."

Brilliant first instalment, starts off quite gently then gets stranger as revelations start to emerge, catching your attention. Damn it, I have to work now.

Off to a great start of a very original story. Kudos!

Interesting!