All Comments on 'The Devil's Due'

It's about time someone wrote an ebony/incest story that didn't have some jacked-up African-American stereotype/caricature bull with a donkey dick mindlessly humping his hot white aunt/stepmom/stepsister and coming boatloads in, on, and all-over her; at last, a real ebony-led storyline where the story is about a deeply-divided family at war, not about the skin-color, and no improbably huge ebony dicks in sight, just a riveting story about a powerful, almost totally dysfunctional family who happen to be African-American. Please keep going, this could be a real winner. 5 stars

If you have been reading this story from its beginning, I Thank You. If not, I thank you still. It makes me happy to know that my words bring some entertainment and delight to readers like you. I have thought long and hard on ways to NOT fill this story with the old tropes and stereotypes that have plagued too many of our stories for far too long. I thank You again for your kind words and more importantly, your patronage. Furthermore, worry not. The story is no where near at an end for Ryan and Thaelor Morrison (nor you...the reader). There will be plenty more stories to come. Add me as a favorite author so you can be one of the first to enjoy the finale!!!

Please tell me you're not ending this story like this. Will there be more chapters, please let us know.

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The idea is good but execution is a bit rough.

You need it proof reading and editing to correct so many spelling and grammatical errors it hurt, plus descriptive terminology needs employing to assist this story.

Theres no mention of a continuation it just stops dead !

2* is all i can honestly award your work, it needs improving start to fininsh !!