All Comments on 'The Devil's Inheritance Ch. 01'
by sushi_taco
- 14 Comments
thesweetnessoflifealmost 14 years agoI loved a country affair and you capture this period so perfectly. Can't wait for another chapter! I bet it's going to be even hotter than this one.
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoI love the story & quality of your writing! I cant wait to see what happens when he comes back...
Anonymousover 13 years agowow, you're such a good writer! and the story is so good too! haha, i can't wait to read more, just thought I'd leave you a comment first. ^^
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoI LOVE the Georgian/Regency genres of romance fiction. While I've never read a Regency novel with quite this plot (usually if there's any nonreluctance, it's not from the hero!) I thought this was a great story. I can't wait to read more; I hope you finish it! One thing I wasn't clear on though...what kind of indentured servant is she? Were they still doing indenture by the Regency period? And, how is she running a dairy farm all by herself? If you ever turn this into a novel those would be good to resolve...picky, I know, and not in any way detracting from this as a great read on literotica--much much better than the vast majority of stories here
sexandthecity77over 11 years agoHonestly, this was a great start to your story and I can't wait to read more...oh and by the way I gave you 5 stars! Well deserved =D
Passion_Penover 11 years agoThe story is absolutely hotter than sin! Good work.
My only complaint, is that there's too much flip-flopping between viewpoints. It's incredibly sexy to be in Jamie's head. Sophia's viewpoint is intoxicatingly strong yet fragile. Both of them together, changing every few paragraphs is vertigo inducing.
Good story though.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoWow that was an intense 6 chapters. I really like your story. Everything was perfect.
AMHJ89over 10 years agoHe is such a jerk but in a really hot way... hate him but secretly want to take her place LOL
Anonymousover 5 years agoWhat did he "feel" inside her to make him think her a virgin? Are you picturing some kind of seal of freshness in an unused pussy? That's not what a hymen is. How would menstruation work if it was?
