All Comments on 'The Devil's Number'

by ZackOShea

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ZackOSheaZackOSheaabout 9 years agoAuthor

I am still working on Demon Pi, bits and pieces. Glad that you've enjoyed it so far. but often times it keeps getting shunted on the back burner for other projects :(

hackman2die4hackman2die4about 9 years ago
updates?

I really enjoyed this story and would love to read the next chapter if you are still writing

ZackOSheaZackOSheaover 11 years agoAuthor

Well thank you very much. I do appreciate the comment and that you enjoy it :)

IscaaIscaaover 11 years ago
Very enjoyable

I just want to say....I enjoyed your story, its the first of its kind that I have read.

I look forward to more. Well done.

ZackOSheaZackOSheaover 12 years agoAuthor

Thank you. I am glad that it tickled your fancy.

JQTZJQTZover 12 years ago
Great Read

I loved this story. Particularly, the description of the succubus.

ZackOSheaZackOSheaover 12 years agoAuthor

Thank you, I really appreciate the feedback!

TarotbTarotbover 12 years ago
Great!

I LOVE gentle Succubus stories and this has just the right mix of humour and eroticism, mixed with soft domination.

Thank you.

PrincessFlitPrincessFlitover 12 years ago
Finally

Hot, well written and great characters. I can't wait to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Most definitely an interesting story! I enjoyed the overall pace and flow of the story, as it deftly touched on all the characters -- a very nice story 'hook' indeed! Looking forward to the next installment!

ZackOSheaZackOSheaover 12 years agoAuthor

Why thank you! I hope folks find it amusing!

crazycujocrazycujoover 12 years ago
waiting is over...

i've been waiting for a story like this to come along. outstanding!

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