All Comments on 'The Diary of Mistress X'

Loved the story and hope you will continue it, as I would love to see how it develops. I thought the plot was extremely good, and how you could not fall for Gwen is beyond me. Cassie has only started her journey and long may it continue, hopefully under the guidance of Gwen.

Rgds Al

I truly enjoyed this writing and want to thank you for the effort you did a wonderful job with this and have acquired a new fan

Please more! It is a good story

This has to be one of the most erotic and well written stories I have ever read,just wow! The definition of torture would be to not continue this, this has all the hallmarks of an all time hall of fame piece, it works in many levels.

Skilful and stimulating. Having read the story, I feel enlightened about the needs of my own lover.

As usual, your story is extremely well written and developed even though my preference tends toward (for the most part) male dominance, your take is well done. I gave it a 5 star as usual. Thanks for the long nipple reference since you know my fetish.

Loved this, a hot journey of discovery.

I didn’t want this to end. Your writing is wonderful , you make me feel like I’m there

Your stories are always so evocative, The descriptive settings and the way you bring us into the feeling of your character make this very hot. Wishing now for more of Mistress X, could be your best series yet.

As always, your work is amazing!.

Thank you so much for writing and posting here.

A very erotic story with a compelling plot, a combination often hard to find here on Lit. I look forward to rescuing the sequel you just published.

Bob A.

Wow what a story, I love it! Superbly crafted and beautifully written, some of the passages are like poetry. It's as if I could shut my eyes and be in that same place.

I didn’t want it to end I was so drawn in I was sad there wasn’t more.

Sequels are The Education of Cassie and Finding Mistress Arlene. Enjoy!

Wonderful ..... The adventures are so detailed so full of life written with sensual fine Artistic pencil ....... Extraordinary

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What a beautiful story full of sensual intrigue. Captivating and compelling. Please write more like this

Thank you