by SirAuthor
Good one! He really got himself into a mess, didn't he? And you made a very good story of it. Thank you
4 stars. It was very well written and engaging, and I almost gave it 5 stars except for 2 problems:
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1. he never told Lisa he slept with the ex :(
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2. And I feel sad for Gordon, he's attracted to Jan who seems to feel cheating is OK :(
I liked the story, as a whole. Took him long enough to figure out that his actions were under rational control and he didn't have to bed a woman every time an opportunity presented itself. In fact, I was mildly shocked he turned the corner on that.
Very good. About 2/3 of t HD e way through I was reminded of a quote from Montel Wiliams years ago "Your exes are your exes for a reason", when discussing getting back with your exes.
Loved the story. As a side note for authors and readers, people should not take Tylenol for a hangover. Alcohol interferes with the metabolism of acetaminophen (the active ingredient in Tylenol) causing the formation of toxic metabolites which can damage the liver.
I liked the story. BUT, is it the best you can do, having Sean reply "Ditto" and "Back at you" as responses to a compliment or whatever it was? It's sort of saying that Sean wants to respond, but is too stupid to think of something of his own.