All Comments on 'The Dinner Date'

The thing is, you need an editor. It would have been a much better story if you didn't have so many spelling and grammer errors. The story line was good, i just wish you could have made it more enjoyable with corrections.

That anonymous user got it right. It really, REALLY, screws up a read if the reader has to stop every few words to try to figure out spelling or grammatical questions. It turns what might be a good read into a mediocre one at best.

As for me.. I couldn't finish it.