All Comments on 'The Director Helps a Marriage'

by Amaraine

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Mistress? Master? Horseshit!

Mind control, Fetish or BDSM but NOT the LW section. How hard can that be to understand?

1 star ONLY because negative stars aren't yet available.

26thNC26thNCalmost 4 years ago

Enough submissions on dismissed and sissy cuckolds.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
No category for this

Just the trash bin!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
You want assertive?

Pack yourbags and GTF out of my house and life... you have 7 minutes. Do not be here when I get back or I will dropkick your ass through the goal posts of life.:)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Why oh why, do authors think loving wives ...

is the same as fetish category? What the fuck will it take for these idiots to realize they're posting in the wrong category? You will get a better audience and scoring in the right category.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Directing

Well done Amaraine. Please keep the Director directing.

xperaxperaalmost 4 years ago
superb

fantastic build up. superb writing

Impo_64Impo_64almost 4 years ago
Should have stayed in "Mind Control"...

Should have stayed in "Mind Control"... At least no one would read this garbage...1* (where are the negative ratings when we need them?)

ShadowRosieShadowRosiealmost 4 years ago

I read half of it then it got to the "does he have to know everything" verbal questionnaire and I changed stories. Fooling around outside of the marriage bonds makes Jane a divorcee. Too much of the same crap every time and the readers go elsewhere.

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