All Comments on 'The Divine Gambit Ch. 01'

Fantastic opening chapter.

Well thought out with interesting characters.

Looking forwards to see where you take this story and wondering what is hidden inside Beth as well...

Great first chapter.

looking forward to read the rest.

Fantastic opening chapter! I'm looking forward to this journey.

Great start. Looking forward to more.

This is exciting and interesting. Can't wait to see where it goes!

Top opening chapter. Love the last sentence.

Five stars

Interesting, very interesting. Looking forward to more and much more. Very promising first story.

Great story!

Schizophrenic hero finding out what makes him tick? A Dragon is born.

Can't go wrong with the Dragon Story, great setup.

Just found you. Really looking forward to what comes next.

Same vein as the Endangered series by ltpc.

I hope you'll take it further.

Are efing kidding me!? Got hooked......immediately!

You’re sneaking up on this, I like it. Looking forward to the next one.

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Great start and so well written. Please keep sharing your talent.

Nicely set up . I am intrigued .

What what what???!?!!??!??! Wow. 5* intro!

OK, a fun start, and a nice only slightly winding path through it. The last question was a nice giveaway without being completion outright. Kind of wanted his answers to some other questions but this was a nice quick route.