All Comments on 'The Divorcee and the Yard Boy Ch. 10'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Invitation Fail!

I was walking my dog and never ever got asked into the den of iniquity called Gloria's house. I only got to see the striptease(not). Good story keep it going.

MERANTIXMERANTIXover 13 years ago
SOME SUGGESTIONS

THE STORY IS REALLY MOVING ON GREAT BUT THEN IT SEEMS ITS ONLY GLORIA WHO IS BEING BANGED . HOW ABOUT IF WE ADD 1 MORE CHARACTER IN IT SAY THE GUY ' S HOT LATINO TEACHER . I MEAN AFTER ALL GLORIA IS A SLAVE RIGHT SO SHE CAN BE USED TO SEDUCE THE TEACHER AND LATER ON CAN BE BLACKMAILED TO BE PART OF THIS SEX RING . HOWZ THAT : - O )

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