All Comments on 'The Doldrums: the Sailor and the Virgin Ch. 01'

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Freddog6601 about 8 years ago

Nice story do far

4* Based on the quality of writing and story.

Please finish it.

Anonymousabout 8 years ago

Flipping Great!

Looking forward to more of this story! It's a relief to find a well written story that entertains and titillates without poor grammar distracting or detracting from the enjoyment.

Keep it up!

Anonymousabout 8 years ago

Nicely done, please keep going!

Very readable and with a bit of intrigue that keeps one wanting more.

astushkin almost 8 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the comments

This is my first story, so I really appreciate the positive feedback :). Further chapters are on the way!

Anonymousabout 2 years ago

You have skill as a writer without a doubt...

however, unless this story is finished (maybe it is?) Its simply a slighyly odd story about boating.

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