All Comments on 'The Dom you Want'

by Mastrbull

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sultrluv2sultrluv2almost 4 years ago

The goal achieved through multiple multiple O’s and denial is deviously fun ... I enjoyed the detail in your writing, I hope you continue their story. It is very difficult for a sub to find someone as attentive as this ... I had a Dom like this once and may never again....it is rare.

craigoolcraigoolalmost 4 years ago
This is D/s. This is BDSM/

This story shows the knowledge and experience of someone who has real world experience, care and compassion for their partner. It is not the product of some wanker's 50 shades wanna be fantasy. It is a well written story, richly detailed. In a BDSM story I always ask "Would I be willing to be either side of the slash?" It is a question worth asking in real life too. This is indeed the Dom you want as a submissive, and as a brother Dom I would be proud to know him. Continue this story. Continue writing. You are good, don't waste it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Amazing

Wonderfully written. Please give us more! ;-)

AlexaIphoneAlexaIphonealmost 4 years ago
Just can't get enough

This story actually brought a smile on my face for more than one occasions . It's realistic and beautiful . Thanks for sharing it with us.

mariak_66mariak_66almost 4 years ago
Prize

A great prize is given to those who are patient and observant, and the prize is so lucky to be received.

Payne_HallPayne_Hallover 3 years ago

I just did this slight little “heheh” sound out loud at work at the “observant” and “patient” bit. Nice :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Well, my expectations just skyrocketed

JellyishJellyishabout 1 month ago

Delicious story (all 6 of them!) and well told. Are they true? If so I’d like to place an order for you, asap! 😜🙌🏽

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