All Comments on 'The Dorm'

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bornagainbornagainover 17 years ago
Shelly the tease

That was mean of Shelly to tease steve and leave him like that Steve should have said to her I want you to fuck me then tell brian to get lost .

Pat.

Atlanta,Ga.

bluknightbluknightalmost 17 years ago
Good stuff

It could have used a little more build up, but I liked it overall. I like when she tells him not to ask, but to order her... Could have used a little more description, but still a good job.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
MORE!

I want to see just how far she's willing to take THIS!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
MORE!

I want to see just how far she's willing to take THIS!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

plox

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Please more & make it a series

It's a good start for a new series :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Nice...

No doubt waiting for the phone call from his aunt, inviting him to join her whilst uncle is away on a business trip, huh?

Good job, could have been a bit more descriptive though.😊

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