All Comments on 'The Dorms Ch. 01'

Welcome to Lit and congrats on your first story. It’s a good one and probably warrants more chapters. I think it’s missing a little in the sexy department. Maybe it could use a bit more tension either reluctance on his part or more force on theirs. Embarrassment or humiliation can add a jolt of tension as can teasing or even some edgy meanness. Don’t get me wrong. It is a good story and normally I’d heap the compliments on a new writer or first story but I lo<3 cfnm stories and think you do too. Don’t make everyone so eager and willing. Spice up the emotions. L O R

I loved it...but I'm a sucker for a big cock. I hope there's more, because those girls are going to need more.

Your story line is a lot of fun, would like to see more hype and anticipation leading up to the sex

Are you Diana Retnuhvek?

Can we have the next chapter please?

I thought i was lucky to be endowed with a seven inch long cock with a good six inch circumference. Am jealous now. Was rock hard through to the end of the story so going to go and pull myself off and shoot a load/ What a waste!