All Comments on 'The Double D's Play D&D'

Too much game playing and not enough fucking. I was asleep by page 3.

Enjoyable and very erotic.

Please write asequel - this is the best story on this site! (And I don't even play D & D)

One of the very best stories on the site. In fact, it's the only one I've read more than once. That's how hot it was ! Definitely deserves sequels.

that was a great story. i haven't read your work in a long time. i had forgotten how good of a writer you were.

Stupid, ridiculous, poorly written, boring, and unoriginal apart from the setting. Utter rubbish and humourless, unless of course you think a geek fucking a cheerleader is funny. Oh yes, ha ha. I'm splitting my sides.

Complete waste of time.

People who vote this high have absolutely no idea.

Twaddle!

I love all your stories, but this might just be the best.

Any chance of a sequel?

Why did this never happen when I played D&D?

would love to see and read another

The people have spoken! :)

i loved it.. part 2!!!!

Excellent story man, I?d like to see

part II!

Like the Double D's themseleves, I can't wait for next week's adventure either! I'd love to see what adventures in fucking the DM can come up with a whole week to prepare.

Brilliant piece of literature man! The whole damn story seemed so long, but this shit is so fucking good that 5 pages just wasn't big enough. Keep this stuff coming man, maybe a 'Part 2'?

Probably because I don't know the D&D game, but didn't make an interesting read.

Funny and hot all at once! I've got to read more of your stuff now.

That was excellent, i don't read many stories on here, but i'm always looking for your latest exploit, keep up the good work.

Never played D&D, so had no idea what was going on, but the story was mightily funny and impressively erotic

Not only was this story making me laugh my ass off in several places, it was a lot of fun to read. Nice fantasy. I have actually come close to having something similar happen, only with one girl, and she ended up killing the game by taking the DM out of it with her impatience for sex. lol!

Despite the extremely irritating attitudes of the two main characters, the story was fantastic! If it wasn't for the constant sloppy typing it would have been perfect! Clean up the English a bit and every line will be a gem.

Title says it all, though two questions:

Do you plan to do more like this, the Cockweasel the Goblin adventures? Please say yes

And where exactly does this group meet.... :)

Lovely story. I found it funny, and being a D&D fan myself, more than a little like a wish come true. Excellent work.

I loved it. I have played D & D, Marvel, Rifts, ETC and would love to see more of the Double D's. Thank you!!!!

I have read everyone of your stories George and I love everyone. Do one more this George, I loved it

Mate, this was just awesome. I very rarely read a story on here from start to finish, but this had a bit of eveyrthing. Your characterisation and scene setting was great, and the sex (when it came) was hot. Well built up, and you definitely delivered at the end.

I wasn't expecting much when I came in (seeing it in the humour category), but really did enjoy it. As a fellow D&D player myself, I can only hope that a session one day goes this way.

Keep it up, and I for one will keep reading them.

Dear George,

I have read every one of your stories and I gotta hand it to you, you got a gift. Your not like a lot of the other writers who seem to be jacking off to their own story and therefor jump straight to the sex, you set the scene, like in your "Mike & Stuart's Excellent Porno". Anyway, thanks for your most recent edition,

Your biggest fan,

Alex

I love all your stories. Up until now I thought you were great now I see you are a God.

Being a D&D fan myself makes the story even better.

I hope you continue writing a lot of these great stories and sequals to this one will be most appreciated but many.

Another fan here. I guess we all read the wrong rule book when we played. :)

I never played D&D, but I still enjoyed the read...it was fun. Hey didn't we all want to nail the cheerleaders, back in school. Why do you think they became cheerleaders in the first place?

i wrote the last comment and had it as a fifty on the thermometer, i meant it to be a hundred.

Hey Tasker

Don't listen to anyone that says your story wasn't good. Someone said it wasn't good because it didn't stick with the D & D sex guide. Screw them. It was creative and hot. Keep it up. Can't wait for the next adventure.

3.5 is the best edition ever. Too bad this wasn't up to date, but it was still a great story.

Next time consult the Book of Erotic Fantasy (aka the D&D sex book).

Yes I am a purist.

I don't know why this wasn't an editor's pic. What is wrong with those people?

Writing a long drawn out story doesn't make it creative!

I used to play D&D in high school, and I do wish the play had been this great back then. Ah, if only... :-)

Like many others here on this message board I too played D&D, but unfortunately I never had a session like murray, david, and adam did with the "Double-D's". Nice touch, keep up the good work.

Fantastic story!

If only D&D was like this when I used to play. :-)

I play D&D, still do now and again and this really made me smile.

Cant wait for their next session lol.... Keep up the good work

I've been gaming for years, still do, and I LOVED this story, I must say I've never had a game as fun as that, but me & my Fiance are thinking about basing adventure off it now (how's that for geeky?)

Above & beyond the humor, the writing was well done, I found the dialouge belivable & realistic, sometimes a rarity with the stories here. Awesome Job

it was great like all your work thank you for the good read.

This was a very good read as I was entertained throughout. I thought it was hilarious and sexy even with geeks. I also played some D&D back in the day and wish it were half as eventful. Smootches to the author.