All Comments on 'The Downfall of Arya Pt. 01'

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BoMac64BoMac64about 9 years ago
Hmm

Not bad at first reading. Am going to be most interested in eeing where this leads.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
new author

This writer has potential. Loved it can't wait to read more

Auden JamesAuden Jamesabout 9 years ago
Crap

A storyless cluster of clichéd porn fuck numbers, written in something akin to Basic English. Not worth anyone's reading time.

–AJ

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