by adri_kingsley
Damn, the downside of finding a fresh story is having to to wait for the the next chapter.
There is something wrong, this chapter does not show up as a part of a series as it should. I only found this while checking what else you have written, there was no link at the 2nd chapter.
This story is fantastic! One of my favorites to follow. I don’t want to disrupt your creative process but PLEASE don’t leave us bereft of an update for another 5 months. I don’t think my heart can take it XD
Chapter 2 just stands out for me.
Also, you don't need to write the names because it's in 3rd person. Usually it's very wattpaddy to write in 1st person and say the name plus POV. You have a good thing going, please don't spoil it.