All Comments on 'The Dream'

Well written and whats more, this transcends ordinary sex stories. Its fun sexy romp that allows for thoughtful introspection on the part of the reader. Kudos to Skye_sub, I find your writing a refreshing break from the normal stroke fare. Five stars to this brilliant author.

Loved it! Looking forward to the continuation of this story. Thanks.

Sexy and comical. Totally enjoyed reading this. It put a smile on my face and a tingle in my pussy. Thanks.

Oh, what a marvelous & sensual story. More, please. It's so cool to read a lesbian story with depth, emotion & humor. Good work.

In a few places there were errors tgat an editor may have helped catch but your writing is prwttyvdambed good.

I adore stories of sapphic sexual awakenings and this was very well done. I hope you continue it :)

What a great story. I was hooked with your really tight writing style and exploratory flair. So true to life, I was able to relive my own experiences and really did feel the emotions, flavor and breathlessness of summer love. Great job, keep it up, you're a natural. Xoxoxoxo Annette

DAMN, that is one realistic story. Well written, sexy, funny and has me craving for more. Please, continue writing more stories like this!

You did capture the depth and passion you set out to do....well done!

Please put me on the list of those craving for more of this story. The characters, the situation, the timing, it all works!

Dreams are beautiful especially if they cum true, Loved it-well done-now give us more of these two

Looking forward to chapter 2...

Moving on to the next chapter. Glad you knew the G-spot move. I've always found that to enhance the lady's enjoyment of what I'm simultaneously doing with what has been referred to as my "talented tongue". Cunnilingus is my favorite activity. There is nothing I enjoy more than savoring a lady's flavoring! Five stars for this tale!

Chapter 1

Great beginning to a very interesting and titillating story. I like slow-burn erotic stories. The description of your dreams and desires was so intense and sensual, and you explained your apprehension and fears in believable and straightforward way. Your meeting with the receptionist and then the therapist were very descriptive and vivid, and the way you talked to each other and arranged a date sounded very cute and natural. I wonder is the receptionist supposed to be Brittni from your other stories, or at least based on her? This part was really hot: "Her lovely, wavy, strawberry blond hair was loose around her face, accentuating her natural beauty to a breathtaking level. She wore tight blue jeans with rips in the legs wide enough to reveal her toned legs. She wore a tailored shredded shirt that left very little to the imagination. Her breasts were larger than mine I realized in anticipation (of what? I wasn't sure yet) and I was reminded of Logan telling me that my tits were the perfect size and that if I had any more they'd be wasted. Should I be able to touch hers... I didn't feel they'd be wasted though, not at all.

I indulged briefly in a fantasy of what I would do were I given the chance to unsnap her bra and I began to feel some real heat spreading from inside my tight leather pants. The pounding of a bass drum amidst a delicious bass lick signaled the start of their first song. I squirmed futilely in my chair and crossed my legs to try and quell the burning desire spreading from my loins throughout me. The music was loud, concise and theatric in a style similar to Florence and the Machine. I couldn't help but smile as I read the banner with their name, 'Pussy Quiet' scrawled across it; no doubt an allusion to Pussy Riot- a band they couldn't be more dichotomous to. Jodie was clearly a talented bassist. Her fingers moved like lightening on the strings and up the neck. I couldn't help but imagine was else those fingers could do as I felt a warming wet surge flood my panties. Never could I think of a time I'd literally gotten so wet without some sort of physical contact. It was at that moment, that I knew this was going to be the longest show of my life." Really looking forward to the next chapter. I'm already hard.

Chapter 2

Really erotic and intense chapter. What transpired between you two seemed like a natural progression, and was really well written. The part where you made out in the grass, by the lake, and you ate her pussy, made me so hard. My favorite part was: "As I ran my tongue from her opening to her already hardened clit I was taken aback by how wonderful she tasted. It wasn't as strong a flavour as I imagined it would be, instead it was as refreshing as my cloud fantasy but warm. I wanted to drink her in strongly, in gulps but I knew I needed to hold back and move slowly so as not to overstimulate her sensitive bud. I feathered kisses and little nibbles on her outer lips. In between kisses and nibbles I would lightly run my tongue in between the lips of her pussy. She was very wet and moaning quite loudly now.

She grasped my head and pushed it further down which I took as a sign that I was getting this right. I could feel the grass brushing my own hardened nipples as I ran my tongue firmly up her slit until I reached the throbbing bud of her sex. I moved my tongue around it increasing my pressure as I spiraled it in towards the hardened nub of her clit. She cried out as I applied more pressure on it with my tongue and closed my lips around it sucking while tonguing her clit firmly. She began to cry out gasping as shockwaves of pleasure slammed her to her very core.

Emboldened, I kept going, feeding off her frenzy as her nails raked up my back. I felt certain she must have drawn blood but I didn't care in the slightest. I knew she was close and wanted to feel her explode more than I wanted anything.

In that moment, I decided to take advantage of a move a former boyfriend did that could drive me into a wanton, screaming mess. Following his example, I moved my finger up and slipped it inside her just as I felt her tensing up in precursor to an orgasm. I hooked my finger upwards searching for the firm patch indicating her "g" spot and rubbed in a circular pattern. It didn't take long and she erupted in a furious display of mind bending orgasm. She cried out, clawed my back further, grasped and pulled my hair while pushing my face firmly into her pussy. I sucked her cum as it flowed around my finger, clamped in place by her spasming pussy.

Once she finished, she tugged on my arm and pulled me up to her face drawing me in for a deep passionate kiss. After she had sucked and licked her cum from around my mouth; she pushed my head into the crook of her shoulder where I felt just as satisfied as I knew she did. As I rested my head there, our naked bodies intertwined and she began exploring my flesh with her free hand. She teased and pinched my nipples bringing them to complete attention and I moaned softly as she triggered the pleasure center of my brain. Shifting herself so she was lying on her side, she licked, sucked and fingered me to the quickest orgasm I'd ever had."

So hot. And nice touch with your shirt being thrown into a river LOL. Looking forward to reading more.

Chapter 3

Such a fun and naughty conclusion. I liked the detail with an old couple giving you odd looks, and how you freaked out those women. This was my favorite part: "She put the poncho on, looking about as ridiculous as you could imagine someone looking wearing a poncho on a totally clear night.

"How do I look?" She asked twirling around.

"Ridiculous... possibly mentally ill. " I said laughing, "... but, somehow sexy as hell; all at the same time."

"I'm a multitasker." She said smiling. I loved how she was just as flippant as me. I've always believed there is no problem in this world that can't have the painful edge worn away by a well-placed joke." So charming. Keep up the great work. I would like to read what happened in the hotel room.