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All Comments on 'The Dream Zone'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
a dream

Not quite a nightmare - just very hard to follow.

Lukas

msboy8msboy8about 19 years ago
Good bit different

It was an OK story, but kind of hard to read. A few geammatical errors and you used images more than directly saying some things.

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