All Comments on 'The Drive Home'

Where this ended is not a very good place for a "cliff hanger" It needs to be quickly followed up with next chapter and an ending. Dont string this out into a long series of chapters. 3 or 4 at most. Keep sizes realistic and keep them enthusiastic. Girls like this really are more likely to "share" certain aspects of a boyfriend. Heck I dated 2 17 yo on the same night in the same car ant the same time at the same movie and parked with them when I was 17 so these things can happen. Just don't string this out in sections. Get it written and get it submitted all at once!

what a fantastic story. seems like growing up again except for the e-mail and girlfriend

hope you get chapter 2 wrote soon

Please, you gotta make some more!!!

5 STARS!