All Comments on 'The Drought Is Broken Ch. 01'

However I gave you a 3. I have hopes that you will pick up on this same story and smooth it out and give us a good story.

I like the story line and where it is going. I do agree though that a few areas could have been tweaked to smooth the storyline down to an easy but provocative read. Keep it going.

Thanks for the feedback. Hopefully you will see a marked improvement in Chapter 2.

intriguing. I like the build up to this. I think maybe you could of had a it bit more in length as details were up to par with general lit submissions. I'll be sure to fav and keep up on your future entries.

It will be good to read of him finally getting to be with her. I think that will be hot.

Thanks