All Comments on 'The Drummer'

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Venus_in_FursVenus_in_Fursover 19 years ago
hmmmm

Not too sure about this one...It was well written, I guess I'm just not into women that fat.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Wonderful!

So passionate, so sexy, so smart-assed. :-) I loved the way they connected in the diner, and the way you wrote about the 2 layers of conversation. Wonfderful. Thank you.

Spider1Spider1over 19 years ago
Keep Going!

Good job. You have a flair for realism, character and detail. Those make a sex story so much more enjoyable. I encourage you to write more. I prefer to write and read stories with big girls (who have always been my favorite). Nice effort!

justboycrazyjustboycrazyover 19 years ago
Awesome!

That's one hot story!

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