by cheerleader_of_doom
Not too sure about this one...It was well written, I guess I'm just not into women that fat.
So passionate, so sexy, so smart-assed. :-) I loved the way they connected in the diner, and the way you wrote about the 2 layers of conversation. Wonfderful. Thank you.
Good job. You have a flair for realism, character and detail. Those make a sex story so much more enjoyable. I encourage you to write more. I prefer to write and read stories with big girls (who have always been my favorite). Nice effort!