All Comments on 'The Duchess and the Highwaymen Pt. 02'

by Brie_de_Jour

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minxxxkittenminxxxkittenabout 6 years ago
Nice

Ha I love HEA. Great story thanks for the ending

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
More please!

Oh I loved it!! I hope you wrote more of their story. Especially about Willamina being used by many more!! She deserves it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Please add to this

Very easy and enjoyable read. Did she conceive in the prison mating? Did he sire more children; as I can see them spending a good deal of time in bed with his large cock buried in her belly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Loved it!

A very enjoyable story. It was an easy read with lots of lovey sex and very few typos! Well done!

Bellie444Bellie444about 5 years ago
Lol

I meant to glance over earlier chapters to gauge the story's history, and have become hooked into reading the damn thing backwards. Still a fun reading experience.

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsabout 5 years ago
I underestimated you

The first part I thought stood on its own. I still think I was right, but with this chapter you've improved the story immensely. I was ready for Black Jack to die, and for his son and mother to comfort each other, her with memories of the brief encounters with a true love, and him with a bitter memory of the end of his father's life, but listening rapt to his mother's tales of him, and his adventures beyond their time together. You surprised me, however, and in quite the corny way, to boot, but I confess I loved it. Your writing is superb. Five stars and kudos, JB Edwards

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