All Comments on 'The Duchess of Lust Ch. 04'

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I've been following along since the beginning. I'm always eager to read the next installment, great job!

it seems like you have struck a wonderful balance between plot line and seductive scenes keep up the good work

Terrific. Can’t wait for the next installment.

I’ve been binge reading erotic fantasy in this site and I must say that this is my favourite one. Patiently waiting for the next chapters. This story has the perfect balance between smut and plot which is amazing in itself. I’ve been trying to read other works but I’ve been very picky because they don’t have the same amazing dynamic in what your story brought to life. Keep up the amazing work!

My only complaint is that the intrigue in this latest chapter was rather telegraphed, making it easy for the reader to guess the situation beforehand. It’s a tricky balance to leave just enough clues not to make it obvious and thus make the reader feel that the characters are daft, while showing in retrospect that they had enough knowledge at their disposal to eventually figure it out.

Otherwise, the writing was top notch. A few mistakes found their way in, though not enough to get excited about, and your competence showed through in your character development, dialogue, and description. And the sex was hotter than Texas in August. Good, good stuff. Thank you for sharing.

If you can find it in your heart to continue, this fellow teller of tales, also guilty of leaving readers hanging for months, would be grateful. Five well-earned stars.

Wow. I've just binged this and loved it. The mix of sex and story really appeals. Hope this continues.

Will she ever update?

More please......?

Good story, 5 stars, but it needs an ending.

To the commenters asking about continuing/finishing:

I 100% plan on resuming this, once I finish up the current arc of Drowning at Dusk. I have the next chapter of Duchess of Lust partially written, with the rest of it outlined, and have outlined to the end of the story entirely, so I definitely expect to be posting new installments by the end of the year. Thank you all for your interest over the years despite the drop-off.