All Comments on 'The Dungeon of Deviancy'

I *LOVED* the punchline on this.

Cute and silly. Not at all what I expected but still loved it.

Great fun. Let's have more, with a few more detailed sex scenes to vary the pace.

Does Malia practice catch and release of the adventurers, or are they now permanent residents? The discussion with the security chiefs imply permanent changes, but the rave reviews the handicapable adventurer heard sounds like some people have returned to adventuring after period of time.

Either way, a very well told story. Some of the mechanical stuff was a touch more modern than you could get with that technology level, but that's merely my old RPG setting brain nit picking. Look forward to more from you, and hopefully more from the Dungeon of Deviancy.

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Omg wow! I love this so much. Please let there be more!!!

Ha! I'm not big on the whole sissification thing, but the concept of an evil sorceress turning suddenly apologetic was great. I think I know a party that needs to audit this dungeon crawl...

This ending might be the best thing ever.

I really enjoyed this story. In fact, I’ve added it to my “Recently Read and Good” favorite story list at the Gromet’s Plaza forum. Thanks for sharing your hard work!

In a world of magic the idea of someone being confined to a wheelchair is stupid.