by MysteryMaiden
Exceptionally well written - like Ravel's Bolero - getting faster and hotter all the time. Write again.
Very erotic I liked it a lot. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Very nicely done. Here's to hoping that the next chapter is up soon!
Loved reading this story, it is a great beginning. Please write more chapters to this story soon.
I know the feeling when you are left hanging! Will she or wont she or shock horror she will expose me. Isn't it a drag afraid of being oneself. As far as the story goes a very good read.
L.O.L. Janice
Stories about women that begin having lesbian sex and becoming so hungry for more and more pussy are wonderful. I liked reading this one because the hunger for pussy began in the women, but the text ended before the girls were able to take each other and give themselves to lesbian bliss. I hope these girls will have a lot of sex together and introduce many more women to serious and intense lesbian pleasure. Good luck to them and good luck to all the artists who tell us of such wonderful lesbian adventures.