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Click hereAfter a long respite of languid postcoital repose and passionate, lazy kissing, they gathered their towels and clothes and retreated to more private environs inside the cabin for a full afternoon of unhurried lovemaking.
The world had shown Gia and Rance at the dawn of their long life of love together how brutal and unsparing it could be. It did all it could to crush two young lovers, pushing them together over their first four months to the edge of death, making fear and despair their unshakable attendants for a time. But they persevered, and they prevailed.
Hardship would call again over their time yet to come. Loved ones would pass away. Sickness would threaten them. Enemies would attempt to steal from them, even to separate them, one from the other. But the future Giacomo and Rance Martin had mastered the art of strength in the face of adversity early on. They would not be broken.
Years lay ahead. The summers would remind them of the germination of their love. The fall and winter would evoke triumph and tragedy. And spring would always bear the promise of new growth and reawakening.
The years would turn into decades. And the decades into forever. The forever that awaits beyond the blue.
THE END
- COMMENTS
Anonymous12 months agoWondeful ending to a gripping and suspenseful story, Would that we could all have an education like that of Giacomo Jones!
RoyceFHouton12 months agoAuthorI am glad the question was asked about the future of Gia and Rance. I struggled to do a more detailed flash-forward epilogue, and that was one of the things that delayed the final chapter as long as it did, but it wasn't there. It was Rance and Gia essentially telling me it was time to let them go and let them live their lives from here on in the imaginations of readers who've already welcomed them into their hearts.
To a larger extent than people think, these characters use the writer to tell their own stories rather than the writer deciding everything that happens. Gia and Rance are the dearest characters to me in any of my work to date. I hope I did justice by them. I love them and will miss them.
Demosthenes384bc12 months agoIncredible story. You really brought out the different depths of human emotions throughout, drawing us readers in. I would have liked a better epilogue, maybe flash forward 30+ years revealing how many children/grandchildren they had, but otherwise stellar! 5*
Anonymous12 months agoWhat a great story, a true work of excellence. I so enjoyed the characters and their growth. The emotions just seemed to flow from the page.
Well done!
DP
AileyInn12 months agoOutstanding. Enjoyed this Southern Football ingrained story as well as the believable characters that did magnificent things.
