All Comments on 'The Effect of Rain'

Beautiful story. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Thank you. Appreciate the plot, the meaningful conversation and the hot sex. Mmmm

A beautiful short love story, with an interesting focus, and "wonderful sexual feelings" between Sarah / Anna!!

Would love reading more of your briefer offerings!!!!

This is a wonderful story with deft, lovely writing.

What a lovely story of love that just “happened one day!”

Keep on writing !!!!

You have a very deft touch when writing of the developing love between two people and the way in which they help each other to a better life. The story was short but just the right length for what you had to say. If I could make a suggestion for when you approach the end of a story like this, somehow show that there is a leap in time/distance/whatever, either by using symbols such as asterisks or in words. Between "...dragged her to our bedroom..." and "The rain...yet again." you could have written something like: "Five years later" or "Epilogue". It would just clarify things for the reader. But as always, Sandy, I enjoyed the tale. Five stars.

Love your stories. Someone else said deft handling and I can only agree

A true romance that suddenly bloomed just as they were realizing it. My second reading, thanks.

Lovely! Good pace, nice writing, full of emotion and sensuality.

Thank for all your wonderful and loving stories. I can only hope you are writing more for Me and many others Who are waiting patiently ( or not).

I’m on the other side of the pond. So I’m not sure what deft means, but I’m guessing it’s good. I love how you write. I could have read another 50 pages. Thank you for writing this. We appreciate your efforts.

Joey.

Love your tales, you do sometimes throw in some real pain. Poor Milly! But you always tell a lovely positive tale, well done and thank you.

Yes it can happen ...... Smile ...... Great

The body count in these stories keeps going up; its worrying. Otherwise a small gem of a story.

Another fabulous story thank you.

Sweet!

Yeah Fluff nice story

I love this one. Very good short story.

It must rain in England A LOT!! It was raining when they met and five years later it's STILL Raining!! LOL

I keep coming back and reading it again and again. But then, I do that with most of your stories. Thank you.

Small but perfectly formed! My only issue with this story is that she’s spent less than a complete week with her and wants her to move in? Maybe I missed a turn, but if not it’s a bit “U Haul” to be moving that quickly. Good otherwise!

Very nice story. The flash forward at the end seemed a bit rushed though. Still a 5 star effort. Thank you.

Good quick story!

Holy sh*t what a lovely story! Small quibble - writing quality a wee bit slapdash in places, but still a great pleasure to read. Anna is such a sweetie. To me, that’s what makes a romance powerful & effective; characters that are intriguing & sympathetic. (TBH, the actual sex acts I could quite well do without, but that’s just me!) Thank you for this.

As usual a great story. Short, sweet, and totally believable. All you writing is brilliant keep going, add more to some of the stories if you can but write more I just love the way you write.