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nthusiasticnthusiasticalmost 2 years ago

Wish it was longer but only because it’s so good. I can’t wait to find out how she’s going to get out of this and back to John. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.

jskin78jskin785 months ago

Out of all the books on John this by far has the worst plot. And then leaving it how it ended over a year ago. Such a shame. You leave nothing else for it. I can get past grammatical errors normally. But when an author just drops it. That leaves a bad taste in my mouth. This does not make me want to subscribe to your Patreon. This makes me want to unfollow you. Do better author, you’d get more subscribers and more Patreon followers.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Please continue

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I've been away for about a year and a half, but I've been very busy writing on my Patreon site (https://www.patreon.com/booksbyjason). I came back to shamelessly self-promote and toss a few more stories on here to try and win some people over. Currently I'm posting some more ...

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