All Comments on 'The Eighth Warden Bk. 04 Ch. 09-10'

Ohhhhh, I missed this story. :) Loved it! 5 Stars.

Love this series..just wish the chapters came faster..

Re: Anonymous, "just wish the chapters came faster"

... so do I !

Wonder if/when Ariadne will give up her secrets about the old Wardens becoming Gods...

GeoD

I reached the end of what is written so far.

I enjoyed reading.

It will be nice to read the rest.

Thank you for writing and publishing this tapestry.

5 stars as usual. I really like this story... not much sex :) , a lot of action :) .

I’m struggling. Lots of talk about shares and costs and where they’ll live, but not as much character development. I don’t know what they’re feeling and thinking as such, or if I do, it feels superficial. So many story threads that just keep piling up without resolutions. The conversations with the other wardens are just mundane! Not even a “how were you chosen?” from our protagonist. No hard conversations. The whole mishandling by all characters of the Adriadne plot line is demonstrative of the lack of character depth. It’s boring to read about the two eights (one quarter??) share crap and divving up loot and the minute of a frickin contract but barely a line on how Corec feels about f¥€king two women every night. High on facts but low on helping me feel for and LIKE these characters. It’s both got too many plot lines and yet moves at a glacial pace, yet jumps over important information. Yeah I’m struggling.