All Comments on 'The Elder Scrolls - Isekai Ch. 01'

If you made it this far, thanks for reading, it means a lot! I am aware that the formatting is off for like 4 pages. I've got an edit pending with the admins, hopefully it'll be fixed in a week or two.

So far a promising start, i must admit i didn't have high expectations based on the title, but i was positively surprised that the Main character didn't just smash through his enemies as if they were toys, which is way too common in isekai stories. It's too early on in the story to really say much about it but i am somewhat optimistic based on this chapter.

Loved it and looking forward to the next part

As a writer myself, this is some of the better work on this site. I quite enjoyed your vivid descriptions of scenes. Coupled with my knowledge of Skyrim as is, it painted quite the picture. I hope to see more soon!

Well done. The story was interesting keeping well with the play of Skyrim and mixing in enough character development to carry the story. Looking forward to the next part

Stephen is me. Looking forward to when you finally get to Dawnguard. Serana best girl.

a great start bob, would love to see whats next for Stephen

Very good, loved all of it. Having sunk five years into playing Skyrim this is a true treat to read. Please, by all means do continue with this story. Looking forward to seeing what transpires next, what choices you make as the game starts to really open up. A humble request, please be kind to the Khajiit, LOL.

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'Ralof backed away with his sword up' - Nine lines before it was not a sword but an ax.

Absolutely great

What do I have to do to get you to continue this story Bob? I've needed an update since nine months ago. I'm begging you, I'll do anything.

Awesome start to a Skyrim iskai story. Hope you continue it soon.