All Comments on 'The Elements of Desire'

Enjoyable, but for the nagging feeling that hypnosis, especially as used during date three, distorts consent. This is especially critical when others are involved.

I'm a bit squeamish about BDSM stories, but this was fabulous. I understand the previous comment, but I liked the use of hypnosis. That's a fresh idea that I haven't seen before in this context.

Thank you for your comments!

Regarding the hypnosis, I feel its use here can reasonably be assumed to be happening with mutual consent based on prior negotiation; as the story shows, this is clearly a loving, trusting relationship. However, I agree I probably ought to have stated that in a foreword to make it explicit.