All Comments on 'The Elements'

She reported the rape. The men went to jail for years and years. The end. This was implausible drivel even for fiction.

Mr. Anon below is just a little too 'slow' to get it. Very nice story! Keep writing!

This was beautiful, quite possibly one of the best pieces I've read. Clearly the first commenter didn't understand. You're very creative and quite a good author.

In my view a spectacularly good piece of writing...way better than the usual standard and worth a read...you get inside the mind of the woman, and the pace of the story is just right. I loved the idea of choosing the order of the rapists...and the feelings she had as they each took her. Brilliant. And very arousing....

Ma'am I was blown away by this story.

Obviously you have read widely and very well.

What a wonder your giving character to the elements, did so like that.

No question, 5*

You're forgiven your long absence. You return with a bang. Must say that Cassandra for all her sobs and muted protestations was really quite a willing and open receptacle. Gang bang maybe but there is no question she enjoyed much of the torment and was excited by the attention.

I so enjoy you're stories. They are so much more than simple smut (not that I don't enjoy some of those). Here you undressed sultry so we could see lust. Wonderful.

Blaine

Sad. Awesome, in Not the "Valley" use of the word. Powerful. You reached Somewhere for that, and received.

This story is a gem and touched something within me. I sincerely hope you write more because this is extraordinary.