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by bucknife28

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Short

Promising and well written, but I feel like it is a little short for even a first chapter. Looking forward to the continuation.

CarlisleCarlislealmost 4 years ago

Liked it and I hope you will continue, but I notice this is your third story at chapter 1.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Well

Well written......

B u t...

I mean that was almost as short as a premature ejaculation! 😉

But I hope you can ride to the occasion for round II¡😉😁😃

The story has potential, so please stick with it!😃😃

GOOD LUCK AND HAPPY WRITING!!!

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