All Comments on 'The Emperor has No Clothes'

I can’t understand why this story's score is under 4.5. . . I love the premise of a young woman figuring out the grand conspiracy, and then deciding to secretly go with it. Such a clever twist on the mind control genre, and also quite well written. I ran out of steam after publishing about the same number of pages… I sincerely hope you don’t!

You need to keep writing! This is great. Five bright stars and two big thumbs up!

A very successful program, gymnastics could use your expertise. I'm hope full another chapter has some franchise information and where to send a check

I really appreciate the unique way you built this crazy swim program. Very sexy and perverted, and fun to read!

A real sleeper, and to think I almost passed on this story.

I agree., clever.

Please tell me there's more on the way!

This is astonishingly good. What a story!

I am guessing that the rating for this fantastic story comes from the rapid ending with no hint of continuation - I know that for me the story was accelerating all the way through to the last page and then bang, a sudden stop. I still gave it 5 stars but I almost didn’t just because of the ending. I do hope you’ll continue this story, there is a rich batch of characters to work with, and multiple directions this could go. (If it were a choose your own adventure, I would make Grace resist the imprinting and put her into a battle of wills against the domme, culminating in a battle that sees Grace enslave the domme master and take control of the camp).