All Comments on 'The End of High School Ch. 04'

by SusieJ

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
it's a really good story

and keep going but you seriously need to stop with the 'kewl' thing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Great story

Loved the story. Hope to see it continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Good, but dragging out a bit much

Good writing, but are they ever going to have sex? Four chapters with barely any sexual, especially in the incest regard, is starting to put me off as a reader, so I hope the action will pick up soon.

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