by 88girfriend
I Love the fact that this is a veiled Kim Possible lesbian story. And it was Great. However you should have a proofreader/editor. There are quite a few mistakes that if avoided would have made the story a lot better.
Keep writing.
A cute, thiugh at times silly, story. It's even sort of sweet, and definitely sexy but, again, all that is spoiled by the absolutely awful writing.
Did you just not want to have to right the legal disclaimer and right a Kim possible story.
Enough said... some would mistake the 1 in k1 for I add mie sounds like kimmy, simply imPossible.... ;)