All Comments on 'The Escapist Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
hmm

Awesome work! Maybe some slimes and some ant girls?

BigDog167BigDog167over 11 years ago
Monster girls.

Different from what I am used to but enjoyable. As far as what kind of monster girl, do ex-wifes count????

J0SEJ0SEover 11 years ago

I vote for fox girl

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

[Author's Note: So, what sort of monster girl do you want to see Devlin encounter in the future?]

How about some instrument, either of pleasure or pain, turning into a human-like form.

Actually, Japanese folklore is somewhat used to the idea, check tsukumogami (付喪神). Would do well in a soft-horror story, too.

Or invent your own?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Glad your back to this :)

I really liked the other stories and I like the reference you made to them :P. Great read and I hope I don't need to wait to long to read more. As for the next monster maybe a slime or something sorta like one of those earth worm villagers. 5 stars buddy ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
We missed you

Awesome as always. Anything you want to write is fine by me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good Story

This is amazing good to see your back to writing monster girls, I would love to see a chapter with a sphinx.

Joey201Joey201over 11 years ago
I liked It

But I liked your Monster Girl Adventure series better though. Maybe he'll meet an alraune or ant women, or devil bug women.

SPARTAN047SPARTAN047over 8 years ago
Hard to resist.

The mamono are borderline abusive and beyond instead of rapey, but he's got a way out, thank goodness!

The danger adds to the lure.

dieselnadedieselnadeover 7 years ago
i liked that referance

i liked the easter egg referanceing another one of ur stnries im talking about marcus and the three monster girls even though its a android and 2 monster girls

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